Anniversary

pacific evening

No one remembered

what she told him

and what remained bare

between the lines.

Beneath them

The ocean swayed

the last drop of dubiety.

Two hearts, one ocean

made silent vows,

then blended,

whipping the smiling

half-moon into

froths of unresolved hopes.

**

Inspired by Yeah Write#165: The Gargleblaster challenge 

 

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45 thoughts on “Anniversary

  1. Gorgeous, Archita – one of my favorites of yours. The images are so clear and so tightly woven together. It all just works. Lovely. Thanks for sharing it with all of us.

    1. So nice to see someone pointing that out. I lost my grandfather on weekend and while writing a fiction on Sunday night all my thoughts were around death, love, life and death.

      Thank you for the visit and your comment.

  2. That intensity in the last part is so vivid. Wonderful imegary and choice of words to connect all dots.

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